These are my essays and responses from language arts class. Comment and enjoy! (:
Monday, December 20, 2010
Incomplete
Wednesday, December 15, 2010
A True Family
Thursday, November 4, 2010
The Human Resistance to Change - Fahrenheit 451 Final Essay
“Plato’s Allegory of the Cave” and Fahrenheit 451 may be highly unrealistic, but they are true in the way of the human condition. If you take a look around, you can see examples of resistance to change everywhere. Modern times tell you what to wear, what foods to eat, what products to use, and even what music is “in” at that particular time. No one wants to break out, and be different, for the fear of being discriminated against. In Fahrenheit 451, the firemen hide their true feelings about their work because they don’t want to lose everything they have. They just walk on the same path as everyone else, staying on the safe side, keeping their feet in line. It’s hard to break free of the crowd, but at some point you have to stop and ask yourself, “Is this really how I’m meant to live my life?” Once you figure that out and find your own road to take, your life and the people around you will benefit from it.
Therefore, the next time you walk down the street and see that everyone around you is the same, you should have the courage to stand up and be different. If everyone is wearing a gray suit, do something uncanny and wear yellow. Don’t fall into the pattern of everyone else. When most of the world is afraid to show themselves, it is important for those with a difference sense of self to stand up for what they believe in. That is how the world will maintain its balance for all of the years to come.
Wednesday, October 20, 2010
Fahrenheit 451 Response- "What Doesn't Kill Me Makes Me Stronger"
Friday, October 15, 2010
Veterans Essay '10
Wednesday, April 28, 2010
Inevitable Corruption
The king surveyed his kingdom from his window. The window was large, expensively constructed, and had a beautiful stained glass pattern that reflected the light in millions of hues. In fact, the entire castle and courtyard was simply breathtaking, from the expertly designed interior and the pricey furniture to the beautiful garden and the cleanly cut landscapes. However, as the king looked out past this magnificent realm, he noticed with great sadness how the rest of the region appeared: dirty, poor, and poverty-stricken. “Such a pity,” the king said to himself. “It’s just too bad, however. I am the king, and my needs come first.” Just like the king, the pigs in the satire Animal Farm by George Orwell were standing by while their loyal followers, the other animals, perished. So much control can never be a good thing, and as they say, absolute power corrupts absolutely.
At the beginning of the novel, all of the animals residing at Manor Farm are eager to begin a revolution against mankind and anything resembling it. After taking over the land for themselves, the new leaders, the pigs called Squealer, Snowball, and Napoleon, design commandments that the other animals agree to follow. Ultimately, they can be combined into one simple statement: “four legs good, two legs bad”. However, as time goes on, the rules slowly are altered and eventually get diminished altogether. In the end, the animals had become what they had sworn they would never be. They ended up acting exactly like the men they had rejected initially. This is what happens when so much pressure is put on someone to be ‘as good as the ones that came before them’, which was the case when Napoleon tried to create a better farm than the old owner, Mr. Jones did. Napoleon, as well as Squealer and Snowball, gained too much power too quickly and ended up nearly destroying the farm with their ambitious plans to upstage humanity.
Just as the characters in the novel faltered in their plans, the people involved in the Russian Revolution that occurred around 1917 failed to achieve their goal of a communist world. Since the novel is a satire, each of the characters and animals represents a person or a group of people from the actual Revolution. Throughout the novel, the author George Orwell is trying to tell the readers about the flaws of the Russians. He is saying that although their original intentions of creating a better country with communism were good, Lenin, Stalin, and Trotsky, represented by Squealer, Napoleon, and Snowball in the novel, could not manage the power they were given and ended up creating a world of fear and inequality. Humanity is simply not fit to handle great power and control, no matter how good-hearted of a person is entrusted with the honor.
Leadership is a difficult role to take on, and will corrupt if the leader has complete control. If the animals in the farm had stuck to their principles of ‘Animalism’ and made sure all animals were treated equally with no ultimate ruler, they might have had a better life. The same goes for humanity. If people keep their lives under control and don’t get too caught up in their greed and selfishness, they will succeed. After all, having control over everything will always end in disaster.
Thursday, April 1, 2010
Waking With Wings
The room I was in looked like the inside of a science lab. It had bleached white walls that smelled of chemicals, and there were rows of metal crates that seemed to stretch endlessly along them. I was in the crate in the farthest corner from the door, so I couldn’t see much outside of the room except for an empty gray hallway. There was nothing to suggest how I had gotten into this building, or any way I could get out.
Examining the room around me, growing more worried by the second, I saw that there were other people in the crates besides just me. Not people, I realized, feeling my stomach clench in disgust, creatures. Every one of the cages was filled with some sort of mutated human, with everything from little girls with three arms to teenage boys without faces or hair. It was all I could do not to throw up on the spot. It was as if I had stumbled upon some sort of a twisted freak show in the middle of a hospital.
Where am I? I thought, panicked. Is this a dream? I pinched myself in the arm, feeling terrified when I didn’t awaken back in my house. It appeared that I was really here, somehow. Whoever, or whatever, had brought me here obviously must have had a reason, but I certainly didn’t resemble any of the other misfortunate people here. Did I? I felt to make sure I had all of my limbs and facial features, just in case.
I stayed huddled up in my cage for what seemed like eternity until I heard a noise coming from outside of the room. I tilted my head toward the sound, and was startled when a man in a long white coat stepped through the doorway and came to stand in front of me. Two other men quickly followed, each carrying a notebook and a felt-tip pen. Their faces were hard and sophisticated, and none of them seemed to feel any sympathy for me or the others in the cages. They simply passed their gazes over their prisoners until their eyes all stopped on me.
Trying not to breathe too loudly, I stared up at the three men in white, my eyes wide with fear. “Yes, that’s the one,” The first man exclaimed, “Our newest experiment. Would you like to see it? It’s quite an impressive version of the past human-aviary experiments we’ve done.” He spoke in a dead-sounding monotone, making the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. Human-aviary? Experiment? The words made no sense. After all, I was fairly sure that ‘aviary’ was a word in reference to flying creatures such as birds.
The man who had first spoken reached out a gloved hand toward the door of my cage. I recoiled instantly, shrinking into the back corner. I wasn’t about to let them get at me, not when I was still clueless to who they were and what they were walking about. The man pulled the lock and the door of the crate swung open with a dull creaking noise. “Get out,” a voice commanded me strictly. I obeyed, cautiously stepping into the bright room, never taking my eyes off of the man who had spoken.
“What do you want with me?” I choked out in a broken voice. It would’ve sounded much more menacing if I hadn’t been dehydrated and terrified at the same time, but it was all I could manage.
The men didn’t reply, they acted as if they hadn’t heard my question. The three of them walked around me in a slow circle, nodding in approval and writing on their notepads. I felt like a science exhibit in a glass case under the curious eyes of the spectators. Who knows, maybe I was.
“The wings are 16 feet when extended fully, and as you can see they retract completely and flatly against its back,” The man who seemed to be leading the examination told the others. They nodded again in response. Wings? I gasped in surprise as the word echoed through my brain. I don’t have wings!
The curiosity overwhelming me, I put a hand behind my back and felt between my shoulder blades. Feeling nothing, I reached my hand under my sweatshirt and gasped at what my fingers touched. Feathers. Bone. There were wings attached to my back, just as they had said.
I resisted the urge to throw up. How had this had happened to me? Where was my family, my house? Before I had the chance to start throwing accusations at the men in the white coats, I was interrupted by a new voice, coming in from the hallway. A tall man with a disconcerting grin on his face entered the room and folded his arms across his chest, giving me an positive look. “I’m Jeb Batchelder,” he said, “and welcome to the School.”
Wednesday, March 31, 2010
Flight
Your feet pound
You run impossibly fast
Over the crumbling ground
Gaining speed with every step
Your wings begin to unfurl
And your mind begins to race
Until you are off into the air
Toward your impossible mission
Though the way will be long
Though the path may be uncertain
It doesn’t override
The pure sensation of the ride
There are no words
To describe the feeling
Flying will give you
When you’re high above the sky
There are no sounds
That can describe
The whoosh of the wind
Beneath your feather-light wings
There are no sights
That can be seen
That are anything like your view
Of the world below you
It is not until
You take the chance
And join the people
Of the crisp blue air
On one journey
One purpose
For one thing
That you can understand
The freedom of soaring
And the rush of adrenaline
That is the flight
Monday, March 15, 2010
Graceling Project- Bitterblue's Journey
King Leck, Bitterblue’s father and king, seems to be just what he appears: A kind, loving ruler, that takes care of injured animals and helps the weak. His uncanny ability, or “Grace”, of deluding people’s opinions and suspicions about him is something very few are able to resist and repel. Princess Bitterblue is one of those few people, and so is her mother. This horrible king has dark plans for the both of them, and therefore they were forced to leave behind the people and possessions they loved and run away.
As Bitterblue and her mother, Queen Ashen, run blindly through the pounding snow, the young girl frantically considers their condition. Just a ten year old girl and her weakened mother. How were they ever to survive the harsh winter? If they did manage to escape the clutches of Leck and his soldiers, where would they go, where would they live? The princess’ head swarms with doubts and confusion as they proceed onward.
Suddenly, from a far distance, Bitterblue hears a noise that resembles shouting. She turns instinctively toward the sound, but ends up wishing that she hadn’t. Even from the distance, the endless troops of soldiers were conspicuous. “They’re coming for us”, Bitterblue’s mind whispers to her, “They’ll never let us get away”. The girl knew her mother had noticed the uprising dilemma, for she was quickening her pace at rapid intervals. The stark panic on her face was obvious, she didn’t attempt to hide it from her daughter as she might’ve in the past. As if in a trance, she turns, wild-eyed, to face the girl beside her. “You must run! You must run far away so they will never catch you! If they catch you, all will be lost, for you are the future of Monsea!” And with that, Queen Ashen pushes the girl into the thickets and takes off in the opposite direction, leading the oncoming soldiers away from the girl and toward the edge of the forest.
Confused and abandoned, Bitterblue moves the branches out of her face, blinking rapidly.
She stares in blank shock at the empty space where her mother once stood, before she remembers that she has to run. The reality of the situation crashes over her like a tidal wave. Gripping the knife she carried at her side, the small princess begins to move away from where she had last seen her mother. She knows she can’t be seen by the soldiers and by Leck, for they are so much faster than she is and will overtake her immediately if she pauses for even a sheer moment.
As time passes, Bitterblue wonders what has become of her mother, and if she has made it to safety. It seems to have been hours, days even, since she left her home in the castle. By this time, the girl is following one of many streams leading away from the valleys of the kingdom and westward, toward the mountains where she will be safe from the corrupt search parties of her father. Though she stumbles in the darkness of daybreak, she refuses to let the soldiers gain on her. Thoughts of those she has left behind race through her mind like photographs.
Eventually, exhaustion overtakes her, and she starts to feel dizzy and tired. Summoning up her last bit of strength, Bitterblue climbs her way into a nearby tree stump. She grips her knife in her small fingers and hugs her knees to her chest, unsure of what is to come. All she knows is that whatever she may face next, she will have to do it alone.
Tuesday, February 23, 2010
The Innocence of Childhood
You watch as the children tumble out of the schoolyard in one large mob, screaming, yelling, and waving their hands about. They rejoice to the start of summer vacation, and you can almost feel their excitement in the air. Their immaturity and innocence strikes you suddenly, for it has been a long time since you’ve seen others behave in such a way. Then you remember that children will be children, and they will remain young and innocent for many years before reaching maturity. In The Adventures of Tom Sawyer, Tom and his friends continue to be innocent throughout the novel, never quite reaching experience. It takes a lot of responsibility and honor to grow up, neither of which Tom Sawyer ever quite has.
"Some people think they're smart - always showing off!" (pg. 86) As Tom continues through his blissful life of mischief and adventure, he playfully brags, boasts, and does ridiculous stunts like fence-jumping to try and get Becky Thatcher, the girl who he likes, as well as his other classmates to like and admire him. When he is rejected by them, he feels miserable and crestfallen. These behaviors are clearly examples of childish, immature behavior. Tom, like many other children in the world, believes that if you try to get attention, you will be rewarded and praised by those watching. The child will go to ridiculous measures to get that attention. It’s in a child’s nature to do so, and it’s very normal. It will not be until they are older and more mature will they know that showing off never gets you anywhere.
As well as his displays of showing off, Tom provides readers of the novel with plenty of foolish adventures. As showed in the pirate expedition in chapters 13-17, Tom rushes ahead into a plan without thinking of the consequences. When he goes out into the wilderness and drags his friends Huck and Joe with him, he is taking them away from their homes, and in Joe’s case, a family. While the boys are out having the time of their lives, the people that love and care about them are worried sick. Completely oblivious to what they’ve done, Tom and his friends continue with their “pirating”. If Tom had had more experience and consideration for others, he would never have gone on this ridiculous outing. He would know how much it would hurt the ones that would miss him.
With all of the attention seeking and misadventures, Tom is the perfect example of an innocent child. He lives in a perfect, untouchable world barely tainted by the evil that is Injun Joe. When a child is young, they seem unaware of the important things in life, and seek only to please themselves. As Tom learns by witnessing the murder of Dr. Robinson while he is sneaking around the graveyard, sometimes pleasing yourself comes with a consequence. Because of Tom and Huck’s graveyard adventure, the boys were constantly fearful that the murderer, Injun Joe, would come after them. Children of this world don’t think about what they’re doing until the weight of the consequence they will suffer comes crashing down on them. Tom is certainly no different.
Although Tom can be criticized and ridiculed for his mistakes, people have to remember that he is still innocent. It takes time for innocent behaviors to diminish and fade away into the certainties of experience. In the novel, Tom never reaches the level of maturity that most adults have. He still believes in superstitions, rumors, gossip, and fairytales. Tom just isn’t quite ready enough to handle the responsibility of experience. However, in time, Tom will realize that life isn’t just fun and games. This is when his true life will begin.
Tuesday, February 9, 2010
Friendship
Shading your eyes from the afternoon sun, you exit the school building. Your eyes instantly seek out your friends, for you can’t wait to tell them about your experiences of the day. You know that your friends will listen, that they’ll cheer you up when you mention your difficult math test, and that they’ll congratulate you on your perfect spelling homework without resentment. Friends are always there for you to confide and trust in, even when you’ve lost all hope in yourself. Friends will offer a new vision of the world and its problems, and will help you see through their eyes. No matter what kind of situation you get yourself into, friends will get you out.
What would happen if there wasn’t such thing as friendship? If there was no one in the world to relax around, feel secure around, and be yourself around? You would be swallowed up by the others around you, scared to expose yourself, scared to be who you truly are. The world would be weighing down upon you, and there would be nothing to do about it, nobody to listen and care. Eventually, friendless, you would be driven to the point of madness and destruction, and there would still be no one to help. Keeping your friends close to you so you won’t lose them is very important, and is a lifelong process throughout many sets of friends.
Luckily, in the romantic world of Tom Sawyer, friends are plentiful and easy to come by. In the novel, Tom has two good friends, Joe Harper and Huck Finn. They accompany him on his various adventures, no matter how ridiculous they are. Whenever Tom gets an idea, he goes immediately to his friends and shares it with them. This proves that even though Tom is innocent and mischievous, he understands the values and benefits of friendship. Without the company of Huck and Joe, Tom’s plans would certainly fail. Friends help you to succeed in your dreams, no matter how foolish they are.
However, you don’t need to have millions of friends to be happy. Sometimes, all you need is a best friend or two, as long as they’re people you really trust. Tom Sawyer didn’t have all the children in his school as his friends, but he continues to be blissfully happy with the friends he does have. As long as you keep your friends with you and treat them with love and respect, you can accomplish anything.
Friday, January 8, 2010
A Tree Grows In Brooklyn~ FINAL ESSAY
Francie Nolan’s life was pretty uncertain. As she moved toward experience she suffered through many hard choices that would affect her future. One of her choices to make was education. She changed schools early on in her childhood, trying to plan an easier life for herself with the higher quality learning. When her father died and money became tight, there became a decision. Was she or was she not to go back to high school? Even when she made her decision, the unexpected happened and she was forced to work while Neeley went back to school. Francie decided to live with her mother’s choice and did the best she could with what she had, earning her a high paying job. Using your own strengths and senses you can accept what you have in life and succeed without what you don’t have. Sometime in life you’ll get what you’ve rightfully earned and then your life will come full circle.
Moving from innocence to experience is a hard path with many twists and turns. You don’t naturally learn about growing up or moving on. You must teach yourself and move to experience for yourself no matter how hard it may be, as is the theme of the novel. Throughout life you will have to make many choices just like Francie, and it is your own job to prepare for them. Making the wrong choice may cost you an opportunity, and an opportunity missed may cost you a wonderful time. However, that doesn’t mean you can’t learn from your mistakes and make new decisions. If everyone made the right decision on the first try, there would be no lesson learned, and therefore, no greater knowledge of life. Mistakes are human. They’re a part of life, and the point of the novel A Tree Grows in Brooklyn is that we can move on toward experience living with what we’ve done already.
Some people spend their lives worried about the future. Always afraid to take the next step for fear that they will choose the wrong path toward experience and end up with a life of regret. Planning what you’re going to do before you do it can make all the difference, and having a solid plan can help you achieve and accept what your future is destined to be. Accepting what is to come and doing the best with it will help clear the path from innocence to experience of doubt.